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Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Mon Dec 23, 2013 12:23 pm
by Zorgborg242
This is a very good xenominer book! The only complaint I have is that,in the first couple chapters Some of the characters dialouge is kinda Iffy.

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Mon Dec 23, 2013 12:48 pm
by JohnnyBlood
I know. The orignal idea was it was gonna be artsy where it's just a guy talking about his solitude and it's just really limiting. I'm thinking of rebooting it, but i wanna finish the story first so i can have a good outline.

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:59 am
by QWERQY
I read the whole thing and if someone don't finish it I'm gonna maul everyone in this thread

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2014 5:07 pm
by JohnnyBlood
QWERQY wrote:I read the whole thing and if someone don't finish it I'm gonna maul everyone in this thread

...noted

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2014 6:54 pm
by QWERQY
thank you

and just wondering when do you think you might continue it? i loved it :D

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2014 6:58 pm
by JohnnyBlood
QWERQY wrote:thank you

and just wondering when do you think you might continue it? i loved it :D

dude i started this idk how long ago. I even made spinoffs using different colors.

I know how i want to end it, but how to get there is whats been blocking me. every now and then i continue it little by little so i would check every week to see if any thing has changed. i doubt ill be finished with it though for a while.

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2014 6:59 pm
by QWERQY
ok

Re: Fallen Without Sound *green

PostPosted: Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:02 pm
by JohnnyBlood
QWERQY wrote:ok

the other colors are done though.... so if you want to read their point of view