Cavius:The Unknown

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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby Zorgborg242 » Mon Dec 23, 2013 2:45 pm

So how's Chapter 5 guys?
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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby JohnnyBlood » Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:11 am

well this is gonna be harsh, but I'm confused as all hell, but it's not that kind of "I'm so curious what it means" kind of confusion that most people would want from their audience in a tale like this.
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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby Zorgborg242 » Tue Dec 24, 2013 4:18 pm

Yeah I can see how this would confuse you.David woke up in a limbo like world,instead of Cavius.David figured out if hellen is here too,then he's not dreaming,Because Hellen can intercept nightmares if they cause distress to the user.So that means david is not in a dream but in a different universe.I hope this makes sense... :|
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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby JohnnyBlood » Tue Dec 24, 2013 4:20 pm

oh no I got that. I just don't know why...
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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby Zorgborg242 » Tue Dec 24, 2013 4:51 pm

JohnnyBlood wrote:oh no I got that. I just don't know why...

What part was you confused on?
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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby JohnnyBlood » Tue Dec 24, 2013 5:17 pm

Zorgborg242 wrote:
JohnnyBlood wrote:oh no I got that. I just don't know why...

What part was you confused on?

Well theres some douche going "how do you know your real, David?" and then someones all like "Daaavvvviiiiid, Daaavvviiid ooooh I'm a ghoooost" I don't know its getting weird and theres no hint to why. I'm guessing David is a clone of a human killer, who's being tested in a lab to see if it's nature or nurture and Helen is in on it.
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Re: Cavius:The Unknown

Postby Zorgborg242 » Tue Dec 24, 2013 5:31 pm

Well all I can say is that the Story itself is straight up weird and I'm not just saying its alittle weird, I mean its Extreamly,Extreamly Weird. :)
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